If I could have one wish, it would be that the entirety of the ocean’s trash would disappear. It’s heartbreaking to see the beautiful sea, so polluted with the faults of our not even close to perfect imperfections. But even though there may be grime filling our clear waters, and ice caps thawing. I still have a belief in all of you! If we can stop poisoning marine life, stop burning the fossils, and most of all start caring for Mother Earth herself. I may sound like a girl, but seriously you can do your part and I’ll do mine!
Hi Brody, I really like your story. I think you are completely right, it’s sad to see this happening to earth and the oceans. I like the way you structured and worded your story, that was really good. Great story.
From Kyle in Ms Brennock’s 6th class.
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Hi Brody V,
I honestly really liked your story and loved the vocabulary you use.
I agree and I do have faith that we could do something.
There is still time!
From Rose, Ms Brennock’s class
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You are so right it is so sad when I hear about oceans that have trash in them and I think we really need to change that.