Week 16 Part 12

The man scrambled into his master bed at 7:00 pm. As he made himself as comfortable as can be, he groped for his novel he had been reading for a while. Right as he grasped on to the hard cover, “Riiing, Riiing” the phone chimed. The man in his pajamas answered, a little bit agitated. “Hel-lo?”, the man answered questioning. “Hey, boss I have more ideas to tell you!”, the anxious man blurted. “Maybe we can make the Christmas Party more like last year!” “It’s not like last year” he thought. Despite himself he answered, “Sure Marty, let’s get started!”

4 thoughts on “Week 16 Part 12

  1. Dear Brody,
    I absolutely love your prompt, the way you describe your characters was amazing. I also love the amount of creativity put into this. Keep up the good work! If you would like to check out my blog you can find me at https://lucyle2027.edublogs.org/

  2. Hi Brody, I really enjoyed your story. I think it was really good how you used descriptive words like ‘groped’, ‘grasped’ and ‘blurted.’ I can also visualise what was happening in my head. Great story. From Kyle in Ms. Brennock’s 6th class. https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/

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