The man scrambled into his master bed at 7:00 pm. As he made himself as comfortable as can be, he groped for his novel he had been reading for a while. Right as he grasped on to the hard cover, “Riiing, Riiing” the phone chimed. The man in his pajamas answered, a little bit agitated. “Hel-lo?”, the man answered questioning. “Hey, boss I have more ideas to tell you!”, the anxious man blurted. “Maybe we can make the Christmas Party more like last year!” “It’s not like last year” he thought. Despite himself he answered, “Sure Marty, let’s get started!”
I like your prompt, it was very good and I like how you used such descriptive words.
Dear Brody,
I absolutely love your prompt, the way you describe your characters was amazing. I also love the amount of creativity put into this. Keep up the good work! If you would like to check out my blog you can find me at https://lucyle2027.edublogs.org/
Sincerely,
Lucy
I like your story so much! It really makes you feel like you’re there. Keep on doing these posts.
And if you want to see my post for this prompt check it out at https://greyle2027.edublogs.org/2022/01/14/100-word-challenge-2/
Hi Brody, I really enjoyed your story. I think it was really good how you used descriptive words like ‘groped’, ‘grasped’ and ‘blurted.’ I can also visualise what was happening in my head. Great story. From Kyle in Ms. Brennock’s 6th class. https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/