Week 30 The Final Part

Jesse was sitting in his chair overlooking the National Monument of Bravery in Indianapolis, “The Iron. He thought to himself “If the world weren’t so broken, would peace ever prevail?” This and this only was the question that made people weep and rage. If power hadn’t lay in his hands, the big man would not have been so evil. Jesse is a smart and famous boy, known for his act of repairs across the globe.His dad however, had been put in jail for five whole years. I suspect that it had something to do with trying to end the world.

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  1. Hi Brody,
    I think this piece of writing is really good because of the interesting vocabulary you used. Great story. From Kyle in Ms. Brennock’s 6th class.

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